Monday, November 9, 2020

bird problem

   In class we have chosen a problem and in a group we have been trying to find a solution my groups problem was the amount of bird poop on the deck once we had eights solutions we did crazy eights then voted what solution we should attempt to.

my group came up with the Idea to get a school cat and that one was the one with the most votes of 16 so we wrote a letter asking if we can here it is


Dear Mrs Nicoll,                                   


 Makauri school 

120 king rd

 ph (06) 867 5779


In a group of 4 called the birdies have been trying to find a solution to stop the amount of bird poop on the deck and bags.


 We know you are very kind so we hope you will approve of this idea. I am about to tell you lots of people in the hub suggested getting`

 a school cat but before we do we need your approval. We will also do the fund raising and take it home in the holidays if we are allowed.


Here are some reasons why we think we should get a school cat 

  1. It will minimise the amount of bird poop.

  2.  Kids will enjoy a school cat roaming around that they can play with.

  3. Parents won't have to worry about the mess on there bags

And plenty other reasons. here's a photo of what we could do if you say yes


      

Yours sincerely Pieta Paulson yr 5 




  

1 comment:

  1. Hi pieta, Its Izzy. I like the way you design your office tinker cad.
    Your reasons explains on the chainge you want to make.
    BYEEE!!!

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