12 things in scooby doos pocket

 12 things in Mrs S’s / Mr K’s pocket / Sponge Bob Square Pants - Choose an interesting character, who you could use for this piece of writing.

Writing task: 

To think of 12 things that are either in Mr S’s or Mr K’s pocket or  Sponge Bob Square Pants

Focus: Punctuation and Sentences. 

Punctuation Success:

OK: All sentences have capital letters and fullstops. Example: In Sponge Bob’s pockets there was a key. 

There was also a rubber. 

Good: There are a range of other punctuation eg commas, question marks etc    Example In Sponge Bob’s pocket there was a telescope. Why? This is so he could see where he is going. 

Excellent: I can use semicolons in a list. See example below

Example - 12 things in Sponge Bob Square Pants Pocket.

In Sponge Bob’s pocket you would find: Six crusty old crabby patties, in case he gets lost under the sea; an invite to Patrick Star’s 28th birthday party in case he forgets the address; …….

In Scooby Doo’s pocket you would find: 6 year old Scooby treats in case he gets hungry on a mission; A magnifying glass covered in tomato sauce in case he needs to inspect some food; A hot dog smothered in sauce in case there's no food where he’s at; 5 spare collars in case they rip or get caught on something; Dog armour in case he gets scared of a ghost or monster; A hair net In case he runs out of scooby treats and hot dogs so he needs to cook; A Frisbee in case they get bored; A toy bone so when he’s scared he can chew on it; Fan mail that's 3 years old in case he feels lonely; An invitation to sandy the squirrels 13th birthday party that got lost in the mail and only got 2 weeks ago; A dog jersey in case he gets cold during a mission; A photo of shaggy his best friend in case he forgets what he looks like; Binoculars to look for fishes in the water in case he gets bored.

  I think I did pretty well I used semicolons when ever I needed them I did full stops and capital letters over all I think I did well.