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12 things in scooby doos pocket

 12 things in Mrs S’s / Mr K’s pocket / Sponge Bob Square Pants - Choose an interesting character, who you could use for this piece of writing.

Writing task: 

To think of 12 things that are either in Mr S’s or Mr K’s pocket or  Sponge Bob Square Pants

Focus: Punctuation and Sentences. 

Punctuation Success:

OK: All sentences have capital letters and fullstops. Example: In Sponge Bob’s pockets there was a key. 

There was also a rubber. 

Good: There are a range of other punctuation eg commas, question marks etc    Example In Sponge Bob’s pocket there was a telescope. Why? This is so he could see where he is going. 

Excellent: I can use semicolons in a list. See example below

Example - 12 things in Sponge Bob Square Pants Pocket.

In Sponge Bob’s pocket you would find: Six crusty old crabby patties, in case he gets lost under the sea; an invite to Patrick Star’s 28th birthday party in case he forgets the address; …….

In Scooby Doo’s pocket you would find: 6 year old Scooby treats in case he gets hungry on a mission; A magnifying glass covered in tomato sauce in case he needs to inspect some food; A hot dog smothered in sauce in case there's no food where he’s at; 5 spare collars in case they rip or get caught on something; Dog armour in case he gets scared of a ghost or monster; A hair net In case he runs out of scooby treats and hot dogs so he needs to cook; A Frisbee in case they get bored; A toy bone so when he’s scared he can chew on it; Fan mail that's 3 years old in case he feels lonely; An invitation to sandy the squirrels 13th birthday party that got lost in the mail and only got 2 weeks ago; A dog jersey in case he gets cold during a mission; A photo of shaggy his best friend in case he forgets what he looks like; Binoculars to look for fishes in the water in case he gets bored.

  I think I did pretty well I used semicolons when ever I needed them I did full stops and capital letters over all I think I did well.   

maths reflection

 

Pietas reflection

 

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Yr4 Induction

 On Tuesday the 24th we were presenting our transition slides to the year 4s with all the info they might need  my partner was Pete he asked a lot of questions and got the answer  here is my induction slide

Pietas induction I hope that Pete will have great fun in the hub next year

bird problem

   In class we have chosen a problem and in a group we have been trying to find a solution my groups problem was the amount of bird poop on the deck once we had eights solutions we did crazy eights then voted what solution we should attempt to.

my group came up with the Idea to get a school cat and that one was the one with the most votes of 16 so we wrote a letter asking if we can here it is

Dear Mrs Nicoll,                                   

 Makauri school 

120 king rd

 ph (06) 867 5779

In a group of 4 called the birdies have been trying to find a solution to stop the amount of bird poop on the deck and bags.

 We know you are very kind so we hope you will approve of this idea. I am about to tell you lots of people in the hub suggested getting`

 a school cat but before we do we need your approval. We will also do the fund raising and take it home in the holidays if we are allowed.

Here are some reasons why we think we should get a school cat 

1. It will minimise the amount of bird poop.

2.  Kids will enjoy a school cat roaming around that they can play with.

3. Parents won't have to worry about the mess on there bags

And plenty other reasons. here's a photo of what we could do if you say yes

      

Yours sincerely Pieta Paulson yr 5